|Reviews for Paradise|
| citrus scented chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
beautiful. some elegant and awe-inspiring images used here, very touching and effective.
| Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
Lovely, light and fluffy.
( Thanks once. )
| EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
more than half of the time i do fly ~ i have to. my feet rarely seem to be on the ground, just a bit below ground if... i touch.
| meep2creep chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
you call this a poem i call it fancy but you are a cupcake on the top of my grandpappys head which he will eat for dessert and you smell like sassafrass
| Rozovian G chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
Hey, wow... I've watched too much farscape so the intro text kind'a popped into my mind... No, nevermindthatjustignoreit. Er... That's me.
I like this. It's beautiful. Making it an acrostic (or whatever) is a cool detail. I only say: wow. (and in though, I add: "but then you'll never know the wonders I have seen...") Argh! Wow. period.
| charisma1525 chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
This is one of the better things that I have read. The imagery in this poem is incredible! I can't believe (well I can!) how well your thoughts seem to be translated onto the page, because it's amazing. You really have a talent for this. Great job!
| Munchin chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
WOW.. this is great. the fact that you actually spealled out Paradise in your poem is cool. I mean you did it and it flows really well. I dont know if I would have noticed the fact that it was there if it wasnt bolded. Well done! This is really great!
| Arkash chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
| miss lavender chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
Really liked it how you did the letters of PARADISE dealy.. I heard you're entering a contest with this? Well, best of luck to you! Because it's fantastico, mi compadre! Spanish.. Ah, lovely! Sorry to ramble, but, excellent job!
| beti213 chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
hehe... when I saw "paradise" spelled out for a poem, I immediately thought "cheesy!" but you pulled this off effortlessly... well done.
| Trenton K. Fox chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
One of my favorites. Just out of curiosity, why do feel that flying is paradise or a symbol of paradise? The reason I'm is because I've heard a lot of different images of it. Again, good piece. Keep writing.~Trenton K. Fox.
| MonarchsCry chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
Very, well... GREAT, keep writing, please
| TrueToMyself chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
Bravo! Such imagery in this! The first-letter-of-the-lines style is hard to do successfully, but you managed it perfectly. No criticisms here!
Thanks for the review!
| KwazyKandyPie chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
very interesting, an acronym of PARADISE. ((ahh, did i use that word correctly? XD))i like these lines the best:"I just want to close my eyes again
Soar into the wonders beyond
great job! -kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
| Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
so touching and powerful. has much meaning and heartfelt words that kept me reading. great work!