Reviews for Wake Up Call
deathbysilvya chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
I think this poem is especially good-I like the way you merge the mundane and the extreme and it works really 2 - reword flutter, too 5 - reword bobbing, 9 - I really 4 - I also really 5 - I like the idea, I think it can be stronger without losing it's subtlety. Difficult, I know..kevin