Reviews for Avery Susan Sanders is not an Ass
Amhj89 chapter 10 . 6/9/2014
Haha go Avery!
Guest chapter 39 . 5/31/2014
JackASS. That was awesowe xD
jjosieknap chapter 39 . 5/24/2014
Very good story...well done! I loved the characters and your storytelling. I got sucked in and the writing flowed beautifully. You're very talented. Thanks for the good read :)
Amandybadd chapter 39 . 5/12/2014
I'm sorry I just didn't really like how more than half of the story had been about Avery and Collin and not on what it's supposed to be which is Avery and Jack in which they only have their main moments towards the end of the story, it was really disappointing how you made it like that. The story should have revolved more on those characters rather than some guy that she wasn't even gonna end up with in the end. If you initially meant to do that then you should have just made this about Collin and Avery and not Jack. Sorry to be brutally honest at the moment.
Guest chapter 39 . 3/15/2014
Call me masochistic, but I loved how brutally endearing you made Colin in the beginning. I merely thought him cute, from the start preferring Jack, but darn it all if I wasn't starting to feel bad for the guy. It was /supposed/ to be obvious that Jack and Avery would get together, and in an underlying way it was, but I applaud you for making me that nervous! Goodness, I doubted for a minute that Jack would be able to swoop in, so imagine my relief when Colin finally started to show flaws. Phew. Thanks for the wonderful read!
anonymousxx chapter 39 . 3/1/2014
love it! This story just took my breath away and yes I read it all in one day. Than you for such a captivating story
BadRomance1994 chapter 2 . 2/15/2014
Does Avery have to be sooo judgmental? I read one chapter and already am pisse off. I mean, what does Jack has to proof to her, they just met! And she already decided that "rich kids ar all the same" , this kind of position is quite imature...
Aung Kyee chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
i like this
chimerica chapter 24 . 10/28/2013
Well, I was right about one thing. Jack is growing increasingly more likable by the paragraph.
chimerica chapter 21 . 10/27/2013
( -_- ) Really? Asdfghjkl.
chimerica chapter 16 . 10/27/2013
Pushing away her boyfriend by not trusting him and growing fonde rof the boy she initially hated. I can see where this is going. -_-
chimerica chapter 10 . 10/27/2013
A smile is ripping it's way across my face right now. That was priceless.
chimerica chapter 9 . 10/27/2013
MEEP! Yes! Collin is a nice guy with balls!
chimerica chapter 5 . 10/27/2013
Avery, if you do not want Collin, I will take him. Fictional or not.
chimerica chapter 3 . 10/27/2013
Asdfghjkl. Cocky rich brat. I am sure we'll see a softer side to him later and he'll become endearing becaus ehis daddy is mean to him or something. For now? He almost got her fired. And he is just a plain arse. I honestly hope with everything in me that this isn't another "there's a thin line between love and hate" stories where the working class girl and the rich boy end up together. Not when there's a much better option. Cough COLLIIIINN cough.
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