Reviews for Hard as Rock
S0ulSearching chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
In all honesty, this is awsome, really, but it sounded to me like the beginning of a poem, maybe you should go more into detail about how people treat her because they think they don't hurt her anyway or about how she breaks down..um..yea...This is amazing, though, keep it up-pammy-
Infection chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
this was a amazing, thanx for the review.
angel-of-woe chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
mabye you need to describe, how she's so strong? but i thought it was good.
AllyCred chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
i like this...i think it needs more, maybe describe why she's so hard and why she then breaks down when she's alone...but very good it seems like this is only getting started and if you add more it will be brilliant...i really like it. lots of love ~AllyCred~
Clockwork Angel chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
I like the theme...though it sounds incomplete you could add more about the subject...
under estimated artistsoul chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
Very good, and it is true for many people inside. I am one who hates to let people see myself cry so I hid it all inside. Keep up the good work.
Amichan118 chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
its good but i think it needs more, its like your just getting started with the poem and there is kinda a story behind it, so maybe if you add a little more to it, tell us why she's pretending or why she breaks down?