Reviews for Paint
CostumeForAGutterball chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
This is so simple yet its strikingly beautiful. I love it!
deathbysilvya chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
Hello, I appreciate your comments. I like "Paint" and the way you personify it-lines 2 and 5 are especially good. Not so sure about the last 5 lines. Maybe keep the "I am stuck in your picture" all on one line, spreading the words farther out as it gets to the end. I would probably cut the last line or reword, but I think "I am stuck in your picture" is a good ending. I hope this helps. kevin