Love it. Would’ve liked to know what happened to Krissy and Marcus. Oh well!

Great story! Really enjoyed it. Its held up well in the 15-years since you wrote it. Off to read some more of your work! Thanks!

The depth to which you portayed your characters is remarkable. I know this fic is even older than Better Than Burroughs, and I'm not even sure you'll read this review, but I just wanted to show how much I love your works. If you do read me, as always I wish you the best in life, Thank you for this beautiful story.

Wow.

Miranda and Finn have incredible, incredible voices. I love the way their tastes and their subtleties were presented through the tiniest differences and details in their speech and actions. The story flowed so well that oftentimes, I had to stop and go back and read a section just to appreciate nuances.

Dear Stillill, never stop writing.

Read this story yesterday and reread it again, because i love this story so much! It didn't feel rush at all. Lovely development. I definitely will read the spin off about Vince, if you write it!

I love your characters. They are always unique and have depth

Finn reminds me so much of an old pen pal of mine that I had an infatuation with. Makes me wonder if I knew him in real life that we'd have some kind if relationship like Finn and Miranda did. Which makes me like the characters and story even more. Dang.. In love with this story.

While it has been several years since this story completed, I decided to leave at least a little note saying how much I 'hated' it. I was hooked pretty quickly once I started reading this. I plan on combing through some of your other posts to see what other pieces of guilty pleasure I can dig up. Thank you for sharing this one and leaving it here for the masses to enjoy.

Loved it...amazing as usual

I really enjoyed this story, thank you so much for writing such lovable characters.

"The outcome isn't the punishment. Your punishment is the first move." - SWOON

Sometimes I forget how similiar Australians are to the British, the references all made perfect sense to me and I didn't realise that Americans do not have the two finger salute.

This is a great chapter that gives a really good insight into Finn's friends.

Occasionally the internal dialogue is very random and I am getting used to it but it is a bit unusual - not a bad thing though just different. Hello Vincent! its nice to see him here.

I really like the way you slip in lots of references to some really fantastic pop culture. You have reignited my love of Morrissey, The Smiths and Spinal Tap.

I can get a picture of Finn but not yet Miranda, hopefully she will develop over the next few chapters.