Reviews for Alive
Katrina Gabrielle chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
oo *chills*! ack, this was amazing. I love odd view-points in poems, it makes it so much more captivating. wonderful, truly magnificant.
Hercules chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
Wow, this is nice! 'What were you thinking when the end came? And they'll never see anything more.' This is powerful.

Keep it up!

btw, thanks for the review! :)
hvk chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
Huh. That's really interesting.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
creepy.. thanks for your review
RemyxZer0 chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
There are very few that will ever look to those skeletons as more than just that. Thank you for doing so. Your insite on what that animal...rather beast...might have been thinking was an interesting thought on your part. As usual...nice.
Thornberry chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
Nice. I like how "you" is the fossil, or whatever else is in a museum. Very good.
Dr. Frank Was Right chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
This is really good, very descriptive :)
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Excellent description again!Museums are great places.
C. X. Blackfeather chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Very good. The cool thing about this poem is that it's full of motion even though its subject is motionless. My favorite lines are 5-6 and 14.
MusicKeyBiene chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
damn that was a gr8 poem! Ps-I updated Sweetest Taboo.
DathomiranSciFiAuthor chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Beautiful poem. Great description.