It rhymes and it's funny! Yay! I liked reading it out loud (because it sounds good that way) and thought the stain on the shirt part was a nice touch. Well tied together with it beginning and ending with the crumb. It made me laugh and is like something you'd find in a book. You are a poet, all professional-like. Keep up the great work!

hey meg i'm bored so i somehow stummbled across your story (dont ask)..well what can i say? Its awesome!if i had talent like this...i'd be talented lol awesome job i never knew you could make such an interesting poem from tea. bye!

My god, this is blankin' blinkin' brilliant. I'm an inconceivable, inexplicable fan of tea (I kill at least 6 cups a day, such is my passion) and never have I come across a poem of this nature nor one that can do the blessed drink any voluble justice. You're commended. Highly acclaimed. The poem itself is faultless.

Lol. wow. That just made my day!

lol. That's brilliant!

Poor Crumb!

Belongs in a Silverstien book, that does. Very clever.

nice poem I thought it was funny!