Reviews for Crayons chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
For the most part, this poem works. There are a few lines that you have to rush through to keep the tempo of the rest of the poem, and they don't really work that well, but I like the idea, and the end of the poem flows really well. Keep writing! :)
BlindBlueEyes chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
Awesome. Totally great.

P.S. you don't have to put the copyright thing on there yourself, FictionPress does that for you at the end of it.
this is britt chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
I liked this- really, I did, the description was kind of vivid, and it was pleasant to read.