|Reviews for Overture|
| youzi chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
This is a beautiful beautiful piece! Even if i didnt really know what it was about...haha...really loved your use of images...'Moving in three-four time To the humm of a distant rhyme'...fave line (for some unknown reason!) is 'For darkness is not as bright'..great job...keep writing D
| ossining chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Beautiful poem. Very graceful. I like the line about moving in 3-4 time. That was nice.