Reviews for Deviant
d'Neronique chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
If you truly intended on finishing this, you shouldn't ask your reviewers. God, that's so... weak. Commit seppukku now.

I'd say I hate Franklin, only I don't know him enough yet. Effeminate guys are... girly. Totally defeats the purpose of being gay. Way to please your constituents.

All in all, I'd say most of your characters are bordering on 'S-F'ing-Annoying.' Which is good, because it got a rise out of me. But still, I can't tell on many of them.

Sort of confused why you used 'psychoanalyst.' Those are so thirty-years-ago.

I still feel your characters are too, eh, manufactured.
Kittentits chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
SQUE! OMG! I can't even believe you would suggest to me that you didn't like it..anyway...i can't say much ehre cuz i'm telling you everything over im anyway..but i like the SVU resemblance...yup! so gotta add another chapter so we can see what happens to the characters...rock on! *huggles* ttyl!

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