This poem is really good. I hate it when my mother gets drunk and then pretends that she's the most loveing and caring mother...And she fakes it so well I just fall into it and get hurt again. Sometimes, I forgive people to easily. It's like my one friend said about himself, "I am too loyal." For him, though, it probably doesn't hurt him nearly as much. But I really like your poem. Good work!

good work...keep it upT

Hey! I really like this poem. It does show a lot of emotion and I can hear the story loud and clear. Awesome.

this is really well written. your hard work paid off nicely!

This was so good. So much feeling in it. Loved each line of it. Great work here.