|Reviews for Ballad of the Soul|
| Ballerina with a Gun chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Thanks for your review!
Anyway, I thought this was a very powerful poem - inspirational, I'd say even. Very good.
Some words, though, were somewhat misplaced...or not so misplaced as somehow not fitting into the line they were positioned in.
-'Tho some where nice and kind-
You could just put 'though'...it's just as good.
Good poem, all in all!
| love-me-for-life chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
Wow, I liked this. Woot! Juni on the authors list, that makes me happy. Ayn Rand rocks my world too. I'm re-reading Atlas Shrugged right now. I officially like you :)
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
wow... an ending i was not expecting... very good.. well written