Wow! An AMAZING poem! First off - thank you SO much for my lovely reviews! Sorry I haven't replied or reviewed you back only I have been on holiday. I'll read some more of your stuff later - this was SENSATIONAL! I love it! I love the imagery and the metaphors, the way you describe it! Defo on favourites list! And I love the way you separate Back / Towards / The / Sea - simply geniusly incredible! Talk soon, ~DS~

Nice vivid imagery and great poem overall. Very descriptive and the emotions are realistic. Well done!

*lime-girl*

Oh wow. This is written absolutely beautifully. Usually love poems on fp are so cliche.. and.. just not too good (along with angst) but this is so captivating, descriptive... the picture you paint and emotion is entrancing. You did very well with free verse.-Jade