Reviews for A Vagrant's Vice
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
Yeah, I liked this, but I agree that the italics/bold/underlines are distracting and you don't really need them. It makes it harder to read. But I really like the last stanza. That's a great stanza.
happy thing chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
This is pretty cool. All the fonty effects are neat and everything, but they are a little distracting. I like all the different sayings you use. The line "Seconds slip away into oblivion when counting down the time" is one of my favorites. Well done.