Reviews for What It Is
Waterscribe chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
This is a wonderful poem. Very nice description of the state of humanity-(at least that's what it seemed to say to me.) I like the revisions!
Cassie chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
omg that was effing awesome. definitely my favorite. id kill to be able to write like that...
Hit chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
heythis is even greater than the last one. C'est tres beautiful.(franglaise) I always enjoy reading your work. You should send it to ms brown. i bet she would love to read your work. I can't think of anything that i would changelove, Hit
euphonia chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
Hehe. This was nice - I especially liked the irony that "this poem ISN'T" about all of these things, but then it talks about them and Is.

Keep writing - you are definitely a great poet!
Homie G Wanna chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
As usual, another brilliant piece of work. I REALLY like this one... I can completely identify with this one. This might be one of my favorites from you.

P.S.-It's on hit.