oh my goodness...this is soo so so good..

although its quite frustrating,

that she just doesnt get that bryce likes her! so obvious but shes..like clueless

&& omgosh.. bryce is like the hottest fictional character ever. i wish i had a bryce :/

haha..

anyhow,

waiting for an update!

x

OhMyGoodness! I posiloutely absitively love love love this story. Its amazing. Its incredibly amazing, mayne!

Wow. For the first half of the story, I could have sworn Bryce was her brother and Paul wasn't. Man, was I wwrong. Bahahha. At least I ccaught on early.

Awh Bryce likes her. :] Thats cute. I like the Humphrey idea.

please update soon

i really really like it

and i can't take stories without their customary happy endings

it makes me unhappy

so please PLEASE update soon.. PLEASE?

great now i sound as deperate as..

BRYCE!

i really like this story, and bryce is such a sweetie :)

please update soon!

oh my goodness! this is like the best chapter ever to go with the BEST STORY EVA! I completely understand why you received an award for this story. i can't believe that you stopped on this cliff hanger. ugh... you have to update soon, please. I absolutley freakin love Bryce he's probably my favorite character in this story because he can be so subtle but loving... and protective. i also love how Jaelynn is completely oblivious. i have to give you major props for wrighting this story as well as you did, if only you would update faster, like now... by the way i liked the action in this chapter (meaning the fight) it kept me glued to the screen. and i have to admit that your story is also hilarious. well i hope you update soon!

Aw...I wish they'd just admit that they liked each other already! It's so obvious that Bryce likes her.

You seriously need to update. I found your story through skow awards and I love it. The plot is line is cliched but I LOVE it. I really want to know what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE!

new reader. ] we don't know what happen. But hopefully, you will update.. hahah. As long as you update, we'll forgive you! I really love your story!

JESUS MARYLORDS CHRIST. Update, jeez...

This story is AMAZING. I cannot believe that you've left us hanging after that chapter. Please, update soon.

oh my gosh you have too finish this

OMG...she's so freakin stupid..i'm about to go mad...why dont bryce jux dump her n see what she feels after..omg...update soon..

and then hopefully she'll see that Bryce likes her...more than a frend..

Hey hoy!

I just spend this whole day reading this story and I LOVE IT! You so deserved the best kiss award! And this whole outburst at the end? AWESOME

Imagine my disapointment when I see you haven't updated it in a while /

Don't worry I'm not here to bug you or anything I just wanna know if I should keep my hopes up about this story?

I Seriously LOVE it and I would hate to forget it without an happy ending!

Hope to hear from you soon!

_Tina_

OH MY GOD! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH AND THIS IS A TOTALLY CLIFF HANGER AND IT ANNOYING AND PLEASE WILL YOU JUST UPDATE? Ok, sorry about that. I'm just a little...stressed. I really love the story and your other story and I think you're a GREAT writer. Honestly. No shit okay? The characters are portrayed like, perfectly and everything seems really realistic! So, because I'm sure many MANY of us are waiting for you update, PLEASE UPDATE!