Love your story! The characters are so real to me haha. Please continue the story. It's like an escape from reality for me hehe.

UPDATEE or is it over...? this is amazing, no brilliant. actually its GENIUSS!

Oh my god, I'm so stupid! I thought this was complete! Ugh, I hate myself so much right now! So here I am reading this amazing story when suddenly I arrive at the last chapter and nothing is resolved! I'm mad. I'm raging mad. I'm about ready to cry and throw a huge fit, but then I notice that it doesn't say 'complete'. Why was I so stupid? !

Bryce is awesome. I love him. He's one of those guys that you just want to hang out with and laugh with and eventually go out with. His obvious love for Jaelynn is so endearing and heartwarming. He wants to be with her so badly and she's just so oblivious to it. You can tell that he's conflicted on what he should do, but he chooses to be a good friend for Jaelynn and continue on with her plan simply because he cares so much for her. And we still need to resolve the issue with his fear of heights! They need to go on a ferris wheel! Bryce needs to get his love reciprocated! It'd be so sad if this was where his story would forever end. He deserves so much more after all he's been through. Then there's also the issue with his parents, which was never really explained.

Jaelynn is cool, but she's so oblivious! Why does she want Adam so much? He's obviously not that great of a guy, and she was just starting to see how awesome Bryce is - seeing as how she'd get a bit jealous whenever he was with Charli - and getting to like him as more than a friend. She also needs to get over her fear of reese's pieces and she needs to figure out that Adam is no good. We also need to know whether or not she wins the election. We need so much more!

Paul is a complicated character. He's being hypocritical with Jaelynn, seeing as how he's totally getting around, and he needs to get with Taylor. It was obvious from the beginning that they were meant to be together and now they're just avoiding the inevitable. I also like his overprotectiveness with Jaelynn, though, it's cute :D

Adam is just stupid. Bryce is a million times better.

I just...you really need to finish this story. Do you think you ever will? I mean, I know it's been four years since you last updated, but I'm assuming that you still get the email notifications for this or maybe you still come to the site just to read, so please, I beg of you, continue this. Finish this, please. Bryce and Jaelynn need their happy endings. There are so many loose ends! I guess if you're having writer's block or something, then just daydream about this story and see where your mind takes you and then write it out. You have a very good solid plot line, awesome subplots, and everything is really organized. The relationships between the characters are also very well developed, and I love reading their conversations and overall interactions. I wasn't bored for a single moment, and I constantly had to cover up my mouth so that I wouldn't laugh out loud.

This is just an amazing story and I wish you would continue this - or else I'm going to have to be forced to write my own ending, which I totally wouldn't do because it would never match up to your quality and it'd ruin all the perfection of the real story.

Which reminds me, you have an amazing writing style. You make me want to love the characters and help them out. I want to comfort them, laugh with them, and just plain be with them. They're wonderfully written, and I love the story.

These are things I want to know/see happen: why didn't Bryce mention Charli before, what is going on with his parents, he should get over his fear of heights, why doesn't he just tell Jaelynn that he knows the plan is for Adam, why doesn't Paul just ask Taylor out, Jaelynn needs to get over her fear of Reese's Pieces and monkey bars, when will she realize that Adam is not all that great, when will she act upon her real feelings for Bryce, does she win the elections, what is her relationship with Charli going to be like now, and will she and Bryce finally get together for real?

I'm hoping to prompt you with these questions :D You have written one of the best stories I've ever read and I hate to see it unfinished. I hope you can find the inspiration to continue writing until you finish this and I'm really hoping that you make it magnificent - which will probably be no feat for you considering what you've already written - and that Bryce and Jaelynn end up as a real couple :D

So yes, do you think you will ever finish this?

This is so cute! I really do feel bad for Bryce though, I don't think I'll ever be able to pt up with that. It must be hard trying to pretend that those feelings you have are fake. It absolutely sucks. I do think Adam is a douchebag because I am in TEAM BRYCE! He only started noticing her when she was all pretty and dolled up! :( For reals, he is a jerk. I think it also sucks being in Paul/Taylor's position. I don't know who has it much worst. Then we keep hearing Jaelynn tell both Paul and Taylor that it'll be a bad idea for the two to get together. I do hope you update and give us a resolution to this story. I want to see a happy ending of Bryce and Jaelynn! Bryce is such a cutie!

Wow. This is one of the best things I've tea in a really long time. I absolutely love it! Sorry this is my first review but I just couldn't stop reading! I adore your characters and their personalities. Bryce is just the cutest thing ever! I know it's been a whole for you lol, but do you plan on finishing this? I didn't notice it wasn't completed until I was pretty far through. I would love an ending to this story. I hope you consider it. Anyway, I freakin loved every aspect of this story! :D

~Randi :)

Why does every gal have naive thinking that they can reform the guy they fancy...

ooooo, so cute. & lol 4 the teddy being smarter thn him

In most cases, I'm really not a fan of the whole "brother-best-friend-love-interst-thing", but this is one of the few exceptions. I love the characters, the pace, basically everything. Jaelynn and Bryce's chemistry is believable, and you've got good supporting characters (Paul and Taylor).

I hope you haven't given up on this. Or that your hiatus on this story will end sometime eventually.

Hi there,

I couldn't help but laugh a little with this chapter. I kept imagining Jaelynn running round without and pants on.

I don't think this was intentional, but when you mentioned that she had taken her skirt and halterneck shirt off, you only gave her another shirt to wear: no mention to pants.

Keep up the good writing though,

Eleri.

please update soon i really like it!

You wonderful person pleasee come back and finsih this story ! I really love how Lynn doesn't notice that she is gorgeous and how she seems like a funny girl to be wih to! I can totally see why bryce is so in love with her. I reallly love the scene where he thought she was confessing her feelings to him and he was so flustered saying that he would totally say yes to her if she wasn't paula sister. Sigh she is so cue less and blinded by her love for Adam. I feel so sad for all the times Bryce has been hurt and disappointed and all the sweet stuff he says about her. But i love how slowly Lynn is falling in love with him hehehehehe ahh and the kissing scene was so cute. I wish they would kiss again soon hehehehe wo I just love every scene with Bryce and Lynn they are the cutest couple yet please finsih this story so I would know how this all ends ahahahah this was really a great story I have reread this so many time. Already and I really hope younwould have some time to finish this thanks for this great story :)

omigosh pls update!

You cannot just leave me like this! Pleaseeee? Update soon!

Wh-what? You just ended it there? No, please do not, lol! I really like the story, the characters, the plot, just everything overall makes this story a wonderful read. You must continue it, woman!

Bryce and Jaelynn need to be together, haha! I seriously feel bad for Bryce; and Paul and Taylor and your other characters are good side characters added into this romance/drama/humour mix. Don't tell me you've given up on this story?

Okay I know you haven't updated this in like three years, but please update! This has to be one of the best that I've read on here, and I've fallen head over heels for Bryce and him and Jaelynn need their happily ever after! Please please please if you find the time, I mean I don't even know if you're going to read this, but I know that probably about a thousand other fans are begging for you to update, so pretty please could you maybe find time to update? You have an amazing story here and it would be a shame if it's never finished :-(