Reviews for Your Definition of Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() THIS FIC IS ONE OF MY FAVE! SO DISSAPPOINTED AS IT ISN'T COMPLETED. HOPE U FIND TIME TO UPDATE THIS. THANKS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what a dumbass : bryce doesnt deserve her |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG. PLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS! I LOVE IT! I Bryce is a cutie, Taylors kinda a pain to me, I like Annisa. |
![]() ![]() Please, please, please don't leave this story. It's been years but you should come back and see this masterpiece you have written. The feelings between Jaelynn and Bryce are so intense and amazing while Adam just wants get into Jae's pants. I think Jae doesn't actually like Adam but the idea of him. You should allow Adam and Jae to get together but for Jae should realize the kisses don't feel right, the hugs are missing something, and there are no vibrant sparkles when they touch. During the middle of Jae and Adam's relationship, Bryce needs to confess but Jae should refuse him in a nice way but a hurting way nonetheless. But very soon, Jaelynn should realize what a mistake she's made and run back to Bryce. amazing story, awesome description, and overall heart0clenching plot. I like. Actually not like, I love. so please take my suggestions and continue this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! You haven't abandoned the story, have you? You have to finish it, girl. It's been awesome so far. The characters are good. The plot is umm...cliche but the way you write has made up for it. I love your style. You just HAVE to update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the first chapter. Great job introducing the characters. Good so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was fun to read :D Very cliched, but a heart-warming type of cliche. Can't wait for an update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please Update I cant wait till the next chapter and when you finish you have to make a sequel ! Please I Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I lIKE THIS STORY SO MUCH! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK YOU ARE TOTALLY AWESOME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey there! i've read the story twice and it's one of my faves... hope u can update it... petty please? dying to read the updates here... more power! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is my second time reading this story and i realizes how obvious Bryce is being. this is like the cliche among cliches but it also happens to be my favorite type. poor Bryce; i must have taken a lot of his willpower to agree to her request. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story, i hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() "You see, I was sort of born, and he was sort of there." Cute. :) I've read this story twice already, and reviewed too, but I couldn't resist writing the 1100 review. Love this. Hope you find some time to update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! It makes me feel so warm and fuzzy! You rock! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please tell me this hasn't been discontinued! Lol, I just found it. I hope Jaelyn(sp? I never can spell names right. D:) gets over the Adam thing soon cause Bryce is such an amazing guy. Crosses fingers that it'll end with them together! And Adam seems like a creeper...I don't trust him. One of my favorite parts in your story is when Paul, Bryce, and Jaelyn are all hanging out together. The scenes with those three teasing or just talking seems very natural and flow-y. I love those the most. And of course our BryceXJaelyn scenes. |