waah! still not complete and still no update? please update im waiting for the ending of this...

I love this story!

And omg, Jaelyn is so blind with Bryce's feelings. XD

I can't wait for you to update! :D

So I just found this today and I absolutely love it! This is probably one of my favorite, if not favorite, brother's best friend cliche that I've managed to come across. It's so obvious how Bryce feels about Jaelynn and it really sucks that she's just too blind to see it.

I don't like that she's still so hung up on that Adam guy. He seems like a real creeper with the girls. And even after Paul informed her of how Adam treats all the females that he gets with, the only thing she can focus on is the fact that he's been cheated on and was devastated by it. He probably was hurt by it when it happened, but he seems like the kind of guy that would use that as a sympathy card to get with a girl. Dunno, though. Perhaps I'm reading his character wrong. He just hasn't done much other than act like a player yet. Eh.

I like the dynamic you have going on with Bryce and Charli. Though it will undoubtedly suck for Charli since she seems to genuinely like Bryce, that could be just the kick in the ass that Jaelynn needs to realize that she's in love with him. Because right now, she just still seems so blind to her feelings because she doesn't want to admit it.

I adore Annisa. At first, she kind of got on my nerves a little bit. But she seems to be a good friend to Jaelynn and maybe she'll play a key into helping her realize that she's in love with Bryce. That list totally she forced Jaelynn to make was hilarious and will probably make her feel like the world's biggest idiot when the light bulb goes off.

I also like the subplot you've got going with Paul and Taylor. It's funny that you've got two sibling's best friend going on. I think this is the first story I've read to have that happen. I think.

Anyway, I do hope that this hasn't died, despite how long it's been. It's a fabulous story and I would love to see how this ends. You've done a great job with it!

No please please please update! : ) This is such a wonderful story, I really want Jaelynn to realize that she is in love with Bryce : ( He's so sweet, makes me wish I had an older brother with a best friend like him :D

You are such a fantastic writer X) I really hope you update soon.

Greaat story!

Please update!

I think Jaelynn is stupid in the head (no offence), She should be with Bryce.. but NO! She has to be with Adam. :L

You are very talented ! [:

Love the story! I noticed it hasn't been updated in forever! Is that the end, becuase she so has to realise what her feelings are, they'll be so cute together! Please finish it, you're such an amazing writer :) xx

You have plagiarized this story. Take it down immediatly

please update soon. i really love this story.

good story, please update soon, i really wanna find out what happens!

awesomeness. luv ur writing. i had this stupid grin on my face during most of the bryce and jaelynn interactions. :) you had me crackin up at some parts. update soon! cant wait for more.

I really like this story! Especially Paul and Taylor, actually, a cliche that's normally really annoying but you actually managed to do, like, super well. And Annissa is really great, too. I hope you update this!

Aw. Dont you love your readers? Well, I understand if this isn't really your number 1 priority but it'd make me a happy camper if you updated sooner or later.

Update son.

~Serafina

OK so I am in love with this story. Please update asap!

i adore this story. quite frankly it's a lot better than some of the many stories posted on here. great job! update soon?

omgi love this story.. its so cliche its amazing! ah. lol.