Reviews for Your Definition of Love |
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23984 chapter 3 . 10/2/2009 I am now hooked on this story :) I really like the part where Bryce says "It's hard when it comes to relationships." I'm guessing that he was actually referring to the chances of him and Jaelynn being a couple? But Jaelynn took it to be him having to compete with Paul for girls? This story is good beyond words. Keep up the good work! |
chocolatechipash chapter 1 . 9/8/2009 Oh man, this is a really friken good story! i think i love you, first mustard and now this - i'm a fan! ) im loving the jealousy in all this its so fantastic and you've managed to capture their reactions defined through the imagery you've presented and wow your just really good at love triangles! haha which is great coz we love to read them ). Bryce is such a sweetie and stupid Adam, argh what does she see in him anyway? PLEASE update this, purdyy please and please write more! I really really like your writing style. in the meantime i think i will just keep rereading the 15 chapters until i die :P |
Atamagaokashii Ookami chapter 15 . 9/4/2009 This story is extremely cute! I hope you continue it soon! I'm really enjoying reading it. |
serenityxoxo chapter 15 . 8/31/2009 i really love this story! : ] |
Ayla Gray chapter 15 . 8/26/2009 This is so cute loved it |
Hail and Sleet chapter 15 . 8/13/2009 Are... you... finishing this? It is amazing. You have to post something. Please! |
kisskissareweinlove chapter 15 . 8/6/2009 This story makes me smile. I really like the way you have the characters interact w/one another. I can't wait until Jaelynn figures out that she has feelings for Bryce and the two of them get together for real. |
HORRIBLE ENDING chapter 15 . 7/27/2009 wow... sorry but i think this is a really shitty way to end the story... you made it clear that deep down jaelynn has feelings and annisa setting up her all those little tips to make her realize later on she does love him... then you just end it with continuing on with the plan and breaking up with byrce... then the whole paul and taylor thing didnt even get fixed and we dont even know the outcome of them... this is a really good story dont get me wrong, but this is the worst ending that could have happened! |
Jaden Ink chapter 15 . 7/9/2009 NO update update update |
Jaden Ink chapter 9 . 7/9/2009 His voice sounded tight. “This isn’t fair. You‘re doing this on purpose.” that like broke my heart really it did... poo bryce... got that whole kiss scene was INTENSE! |
Jaden Ink chapter 5 . 7/8/2009 HAHAHA i loved how you had a wrestling scene with no like MAKE out ness ST during or after cute bonding |
Jaden Ink chapter 2 . 7/8/2009 Paul and taylor sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G. |
cheergurl12 chapter 15 . 7/8/2009 oh my gosh! you need to update this AS SOON AS POSSIBILE! :) if you didnt notice i love this story! |
lissie2491 chapter 15 . 7/7/2009 Hey! I just wanted to say that I really love your story. ] The characters just jump off the page!...err, screen. Haha. I know this is like a year after you last updated, but I just found your story a week or two ago. Anyways, good luck with the next chapter. I can't wait! ]] |
MarloCarlo10 chapter 15 . 6/25/2009 We knew the breakup was going to have to happen, especially with poor Bryce's feelings. Dude Charli is going to do something bad, idk what, but I can feel it...I think. |