|Reviews for BEING DEAD AS I AM|
| Alisha Marie chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
Pretty good! A little short!
But great job!
| MidnightLynx chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
This is short for you but still awesome!
| JudgementMathew chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
Ha the latin play on words makes it funny. (Shh dont tell anyone i had to look it up)
| Exiled-Knight chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
This is good, simplistic on the surface, yet teeming with so much underneath. The repetition of corpus in the lines was quite satirical and humorous. great job.
| Lucifer's Sonata chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
;; for some reason i started to laugh at the end...and I have no clue why lol (mk...i'm really starting to lose my mind *nods* ) BUT there is something I really like about this poem..in fact many somethings. From the simplisticness to almost hidden spiteful theme... I mean I could all major analytical on it (looking this way and that at it) but for a poem to beable to appeal different angles means it can appeal to more than one person, which rocks for poems! loved it!
| CryNowLaughLater chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
I like it personally,it's like most of my own work. nice job. bravo.