Reviews for BEING DEAD AS I AM
Alisha Marie chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
Pretty good! A little short!

But great job!
MidnightLynx chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
This is short for you but still awesome!
JudgementMathew chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
Ha the latin play on words makes it funny. (Shh dont tell anyone i had to look it up)

Ma†
Exiled-Knight chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
This is good, simplistic on the surface, yet teeming with so much underneath. The repetition of corpus in the lines was quite satirical and humorous. great job.

Katlyn
Lucifer's Sonata chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
;; for some reason i started to laugh at the end...and I have no clue why lol (mk...i'm really starting to lose my mind *nods* ) BUT there is something I really like about this poem..in fact many somethings. From the simplisticness to almost hidden spiteful theme... I mean I could all major analytical on it (looking this way and that at it) but for a poem to beable to appeal different angles means it can appeal to more than one person, which rocks for poems! loved it!
CryNowLaughLater chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
I like it personally,it's like most of my own work. nice job. bravo.