Reviews for Pink
mikesalto2 chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
if i didnt know you i would think you were on the short bus
Manju chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
oh my god! i so relate to you and this poem. great job!
darkmistresslae chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
This is really nicely written, I especially like teh bits written to life and death. Well thought through and fluent. Nice job
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
Great job!
Isarandel chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
the short messages for each person, for life and death, are short but full of meaning. nice.
katmufla chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
i like how you talked to life and death in the end...atleast you recognized life...more than a lot of people who write suicide notes on here. i'd suggest a brief lookover to find any typos/mistakes, but that's it. it was nice, very sad, but nice.
Nanners chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
Extrememly depressing, but still well-written. I've never read anything quite like this before, and I really did like it, although I'm pretty sad now. (

Oh, and by the way, excellent job with the rhyming.
dustytiger chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
wow... very powerful and sad, so many people will be able to realte, again wow, great work, thank you for sharing