Reviews for White
cornered.sensations chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
so simple yet so effective, great poem.
liz anya chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
So simple... yet so powerful. Great job!
deleted-123-45 chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
very strong poem, only one slightly distracting point: "so thick." Maybe 'thickly' or something, I don't know, it just kind of ruins the strength of the sentence. Nevertheless, welcome to my faves!
Moroni's Daughter chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
It was just foggy yesterday where I live. Excellent word choice.
Celestial Phoenix chapter 1 . 3/21/2001
This has some powerful imagery...nice haiku.
kablam chapter 1 . 1/28/2001
cool haiku
Kitsune-chan chapter 1 . 1/26/2001
wow! that was great!