|Reviews for choice cut|
| and flowers chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
its sarcastic and, your a lush for writing it.
| addie pray chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
I loved this, really well done. It flowed well, and the subject was interesting. I loved the second to last stanza, brilliant. Well done.
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
very nice again!
| pneumothorax chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
Edible. Favourites, now.
| lintong chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
cap people are stupidbut then when you start your theatre company,don't forget the girl with the needle thread, and big box of costumes.
| if sighing chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
today is the catch of the day rotting from yesterday
if all the raindrops were lemon drops and gumdropsor if all the snowflakes were chocolate bars and milkshakes,
then america would die out first
I like this, a stream of conscience writing, flows down the page.
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
depends on the cut whether raw or cooked. m
| frisson rae chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
you take normal happy things from daily life and make it morbid/artsy/new.
i don't know how to describe that.
the arts aren't so dead, just repetitive. i suppose you just don't like beatrice chia and her gang XD
| zoogath chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
LSD! i'd like that well done please. rare stuff scares me. it's too bloody...to tablesalt: ouija is this board thingy where you push around this little round thingy. i learnt that from true singapore ghost stories! bye!~zoogath
| nattum chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
mellyhatter!rare, please. go us hippies mohn we can always be a gypsy theatre company and move around a bit.
heart you too!
| Chi Ame chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
Wow... what else is there to say? I love Alice in Wonderland, that bit gave it a nice touch! This poem. It's gorgeous. And amazingly creative! Yeah, unfortunately, the arts are dying out. Now it's all about MTV and hiphop. What is this world coming to? When I become a famous writer (hA!), I plan on publishing a book of poems, and try to get people back in the spirit of poetry! I think that's a good cause. We're raising a generation of kids who don't like to read (ack!), with more "fun" things to do, like sitting in sticky movie theatres and circling the mall for hours... not that I don't like doing those things sometimes, I would just rather be reading or writing. Okay, my turn to stop ranting. :P But great poem! Wow! again.
| reich chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
heey melly. i love your poem. and i have no favourite stanza cos i love the whole thing. yay.
i wouldnt mind being high on angel dust now cos i really need it. oh well.
yeah singapore is quite dead arts-wise. hahass. good luck anyway dear.
love you alwaysrei!
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
| this is britt chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
I loved this, your choice of words, so ironic, but beautiful, and good luck with that theater company.
| do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
i love the fifth stanza, but this whole poem is perfect. you have such a way with words.