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SweetWithUncertainty chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
they some up life, those poems do. great job
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
Love the words in the bold. They give your poem all the more meaning.
Infection chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
loved the lines:"Solemn in stoneSilent in noise"-great

"Aura of the airAroma of the flame"-superb imagery

"Now cry meDespise meSave me"- a superb ending loved it.
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
Nice. I like the use of Bold face words to guide you through the poem.

Hm. I'm not Catholic but reminds of church (with the candles, incense), needs of absolution, connecting with God while looking at a statue of Jesus, Mary or a saint.
PyroHiroshi chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
Hmm... I'm gonna have to puzzle through this one... :p But I absolutely love it!
One Who Knows the Truth chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
No idea what this means, but it sounds cool :)