Reviews for Let's Play Pretend
Unknown Unnamed chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
Such a darling piece. Adorable. I absolutely loved it.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
That was cute...especially the last stanza. Nice! Keep it up!
AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
I think this poem is lacking something, I'm not sure what it is, something about the 4th stanza doesnt seem quite right. But its good otherwise.

Karma Chameleon chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
Aww. This is adorable. I especially like the first stanza! ~Karma Chameleon
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
touching and heartfelt. I can relate to this in most ways. I love the flow and rhyme as well as the rhythm. excellent work!

SweetAcid chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
hm, does this have to do with a certin "somone"?
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
very well written. nice nice, keep on writing!
dustytiger chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
great peice, i like it a lot, keep up the good work, thank you for sharing