|Reviews for Would you try to Understand?|
| Lady Hoshi chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
I have felt this way so many times. It is a great poem, when I have time I hope to get through more. Great Job
| Unknown Unnamed chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
I love it! Your rhyming is awesome!
| ChiquitoPanda chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
This is pretty good. Something that most everyone can relate to. A good message, a good poem. Keep 'em coming! ~TheCryingGame
| sCARZ chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
i liked it alot i can relate to it...
| DamascusDragon chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
I know exactly what you mean! Going directly onto my favorites!
| Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
I totally can relate to this. I've had the same troubles. This is really touching and hearfelt. I love the rhyme and flow, great piece!
| MaryElise chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
Hey That was so great! I'm gonna send that to my mom! Its awsome, it says exactly what you want to say, but the rhymes flow so well and i love your vocabulary!
| SweetAcid chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
my poor stephie. i wish I could help you...
| Rowan MacKenzie chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
Double wow! I can definately relate to this. Only I don't live w/ my parents. I have a dictatorial grandmother. Keep up the good work kiddo!
P.S. Thanks for your review of 'To An Ex-Boyfriend'!
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
powerful, very powerful
| thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
Wow, I can relate to this, good work! Good structure.
| dustytiger chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
wow, i have felt this way too, great work, you captured it well, keep it up, thank you for sharing
| Youneek chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
I actually like this one. Generally, I avoid the whole teenybopper poetry scene, but this is well-structured.
One thing, though:
Change "except I have lied…" to "except THAT I have lied." It fits into your meter better.