|Reviews for The Fine Art of Falling Apart|
| Benedicta chapter 9 . 4/20/2013
My husband has abandon me and the kids for the the past 8months now, and refuse to come back because he was hold on by a woman whom he just met, for that, my self and the kids has been suffering and it has been heel of a struggle, but i decide to do all means to make sure that my family come together as it use to, then i went online there i saw so many good talk about this spell caster whose email is so i had to contact him and in just 4days as he has promised, my husband came home and his behavior was back to the man i got married to.
| GrangerDanger333 chapter 9 . 1/18/2013
Maybe you don't go on fp anymore but I really hope you do so that you know how much I really bloody love this story! I was a bit apprehensive when you started breaking the fourth wall, but it totally worked in this story and I wasn't put off because I just love the characters! Colin was such a bastard though, jeez he didn't understand when enough was enough! And all their parents were douches basically, although I found Andy's parents kinda funny in the way they were so shocked and awkward.
Anyway yeah, aaaawwww! This was so cute, especially with the chapters from Oliver's POV. And SO MANY references, I didn't actually get all of them but I liked it when I did :D Such a fluffy ending as well!
| binnyboo chapter 9 . 7/30/2012
| Fumiki chapter 9 . 1/21/2012
This story is so beautiful. Oliver is definitely my favorite character. and Colin can go to hell. It's sad that both their parents can't accept the fact that they're gay, but that what makes this whole story more realistic.
Thank you for writing this story :D I love it.
| prostock69 chapter 9 . 10/4/2011
Just finished this story and it was LOVELY! Just lovely! I loved Andrew and Oliver. Colin was a fucking asshole. God, I hated that Andrew slept with him one last time; BUT I understand he needed to in order to realize he no longer loved him. It just cemented how much he loved Oliver.
Anyways, I like the way your wrote the story too.
I have to ask, are there any stories where the parents don't kick their kids out when they come out as gay? Or hit them? Because it seems every story I have read, this is what happens.
| Iuno chapter 9 . 8/29/2011
This was such an adorable and easy read. I love how blog-like the story was. I find Oliver so adorable (sorry, Andrew) for such a big guy and an athlete he could be a crybaby when it comes to Andrew and his problems with his parents. The post-graduation dinner with Andrew's parents was hilarious lol but I'm glad Oliver and Andrew got their well-deserved happy ending ( marriage!). 3
| Emerald Dragon77 chapter 9 . 5/14/2011
I'm in love! With this story! It makes me happy. Thank you.
| Emerald Dragon77 chapter 6 . 5/14/2011
Gah! I just wanted him to go up there and kiss him after the first few lines of the song!
| Emerald Dragon77 chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
FP won't let me login properly. I just left a review, but I got my screen name wrong. heehee. still love your story!
| DragonEmerald77 chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
"You're acting like a child, Andrew."
"Does that make you want to fuck me?"...Awesome! Is this your line or did you take it from a movie or something? Because it's awesome. I love the story premise too. Can't wait to read more.
| Nameless Shana chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
This is a very unique first chapter. I like how you connect the readers with the character as if he was really there.
| miraakira chapter 9 . 8/5/2010
this was very intriguing,esp. when its Oliver's p.o.v, i like when you had Andrew as an aside lol. must admit that i wasn't too sure about your writing style, but i got use to it in the end looking forward to reading more of your work.
| Dark Lynnette chapter 9 . 6/22/2010
Really great read. I liked the narrator(s) and the pacing of the story, even though I had no idea what to expect after the prologue, but you delivered a nice human tale. I also really liked how you were believably consistent with Colin's character whereas many writers might have tried to show that he wasn't always such a jerk. I'm glad he was so irredeemable throughout.
Thanks for writing this. It was fun.
| lemonlimediddies chapter 9 . 4/29/2010
that was so cute:D
| infireandice chapter 8 . 4/7/2010
aw! i love this story, it's so cute (and funny!)
*"Eleven…" I had this horrible vision of the man pelting me with what was left of his whopper. Of course, if I was lucky, Oliver would be doing the same thing later that night.*
seriously, this had me laughing my ass off!
so yeah - favourite - review - smiles :)