Okay, no offense, but I laughed while reading this. Don't get me wrong, I love the story, but angst gets me laughing. I have no clue why. It's not normal.

...The whole thing with Oliver: Good stuff. I had a feeling who he was at the end of chapter four, but the way it came up in the next chapter...That was more than a bit harsh.

I hate you so very much right now. That was the single most evil and heartbreaking thing I have ever read, you have destroyed Andy...I hope you're happy...other than that, great job! I love the story, I just hate the plot twists. Oliver and Andy still get back together though don't they? Don't they?...

So sad, but SO GREAT! I loved the 5th chapter, and cn't wait to see what happens in the 6th. ~P'Dale Buddy out~

Aw! Don't make him miserable! That's mean! :'( Get him back together with Oliver. Even though Oliver was an ass... But Colin's worse. Better yet, find a differnet person altogether! :) Updateness!

Aw, poor guys TT_TT love the chapter, update soon!

*whimper*. Oh my goodness! Why? *hits Colin*. Make him go away. I don't like him. He's bad! Dammit that sucks! Good chapter though. I really did like it even though it sucked! I know this isn't making sense. But it was an awesome chapter. I love Oliver! Bring him back! update again soon!

I probably shouldn't love this chapter, but I think it's the best of the lot.

This is very human, at times.

~Sasa

T_T such a great chapter. Not extremely rushed (bless your soul .) but i can't wait until the next one.

update soon!

HA! I knew it! Poor Oliver though. He didn't break up the realtionship between Colin and Andrew... COLIN did. He's a skeezy bastard, that one. And he did EVERYTHING he could to break Andrew's heart when he told him about Oliver. Stupid asshole. Hope Oliver can forgive him.

Homigosh you have to continue.

Poor Andy.

I had a feeling Oliver had something to do with the three some though originally I just though that his boyfriend that had broken up with him was the one that had the threesome not actually him.

It came as a suprise really.

I screamed, hit and flipped off my computer (because I'm the type to really get into a story).

I feel bad for Andys sake. He deserves more than Oliver and way way way more than Colin.

He only came back to Andy because he feels old now. He only came back because he didn't wan't to die alone. To grow old and alone.

All of them. Both of them were just playing with Andys mind, herat and emotions.

That's sick but it keeps the story intresting.

I can't wait for more. Keep up the great work.

-Cookie

“Shh.. What if we just start off slow? We can fuck.. and then in the morning, you can decide whether you want to take me back or not.”

I love that line.

Yay, i can't believe Oliver, the moronic fool. Colin is pure nasty and should be cheated on so learns!My sweet Andrew, i hope you cheer him up soon Xx Your adoring fan Xx

thats so sad! im so sorry for andrew... i still love oliver...wow this chaper came out so fast! way to go!

T_T you just HAVE to end it right there, don't you? i should shoot you right now for putting so much suspense in an update.

of course, i'll forgive you if you update soon..

beautiful first-person story, just please dont rush like you're starting to do in the others.

keep up the good work.