O. Secret! Or cliffhanger type thing...I don't really know what I'm saying. I'm tired and hungover. But I loved the chapter. *bounces* Update again really soon. *hugs*

Dun, dun , dun, opps, whats wrong with Oliver? I'm gripped, on the edge of my seat. It's really great, so pretty please update soon X

Great chapter!I liked it! :DYes... everything was too perfect... What's wrong with Oliver? Does he have a secret? Is he just playing with Andy?I hope my question gets answered in the next writing please!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Just so you know, that was THE CLIFFHANGER FROM HELL! Update really really soon because if you don't, I will die of suspense!

'I guess I should’ve noticed that he was too perfect.

Something had to have been wrong.'

*whines* what?

Oh My GOD! Totally like the best story ever, you MUST continue to write it! I wish you would however go into a little more detail with you "certain" scenes, and tell us more about youself and Oliver, like what you look like with more description. I totally want more, crave more, so I'll be back when you write more! ~P'Dale Buddy out~

Aw! So cute... And now you're going to go and muck it up... :'(

See, now that's just mean. How can you tell us NOT to guess who Oliver is when you end the chapter like that?

Great chapter! I like how you're revealing more things about Oliver. And now, how Andy knows there is something wrong about Oliver... which is something I can't wait to find out! I also like the narrative. At first, I thought it was you who was talking, in the beginning, which makes me feel like I can really connect to Andy (the narrator). I can't wait for the next chapter!

YES! I loved it. :) So sweet. And Caramel the cat, hehe. :p It must get so tiring to post a new chapter you've worked so hard on, only to have people say, "Loved it! MORE!" But, uh, yeah. :p More please.

Cool chapter! Man, a cliffhanger-ish thing

i hate you! i wish that i could write stories like this! dammit i am so friggen jealous i can hardly type proper. well keep up the amzing work. by the by i love just about every flippin story you publish on this site, well every effin story i have read which is most of them. keep it up. . i s . b e s t

lovely first person story, keep up the updates!

I'm definately enjoying this. Andrew's a hoot. I love his little comments. And Oliver is cool. Colin deserves to be shot, though.

I love this story! Is there supposed to be humor in this? (Or maybe it's just me, but I find the narration quite enjoyable!) And is Oliver younger than Andy? Plus, you do mention that Oliver seems familiar to Andy, and that Oliver's car looks likes Colin's... so would Oliver be that third party from the threesome incident? Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!