| Reviews for The Fine Art of Falling Apart |
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   tangled-wires-of-doom chapter 3 . 4/28/2005 Ooh! Cool chapter! Update soon! |
| Nails For Your Crucifix chapter 3 . 4/27/2005 "My ass is that nice..." Teehee, cute. Another great chapter. Another great story. I'm sure you could read all the other reviews that are much better constructed than this one (seeing as I'm reading this in the middle of history class and am in quite a rush). |
| K. T. Wood chapter 3 . 4/27/2005 m will smith! haha, thanks for that! Awesome chapter! I love 'em. It's official! Update again really soon! |
| Randi chapter 3 . 4/27/2005 "Or, I could have done what I do every karaoke night." Hee! Aw, Andrew is so incredibly cute. :) I just adore him! And I loved the Dr. Seuss line. You know how how much I'm loving this story - I'll just add my voice to the hordes calling for more. :p |
| song lyric fairy chapter 3 . 4/26/2005 woohoo! more oliver cause he is so hot!I like this story! |
| Liebe Sasa chapter 3 . 4/26/2005 This is so f'ing adorable. I love it. ~Sasa |
| ddz008 chapter 3 . 4/26/2005 Aw, it was a sweet chapter! :)I really hope that Oliver is serious, would be horrible if Andrew gets his heart broken 're so cute... (and moving fast XD)Keep writing, please!Hope to see the next chapter pretty soon!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D |
| Nudd chapter 3 . 4/26/2005 /“You coming?” That snapped me out of it. “Wh.. what? You.. your ass isn’t –that- nice.”/ LMAO! I'm sleep deprived so I had to stare at it for a couple seconds to get it but when I did... oh man! I might not have slept in 2 days but I'm awake enough to know that this was TOTALLY amazing! GAH! *squeals* Update soon please! |
| dyers-eve chapter 3 . 4/26/2005 "drools" Oliver, yummy. I can't for the next chapter, it's all so, so good i could eat it. It's like choclate but lasts longer "sighs". Update soon Xx |
| Stefen chapter 3 . 4/26/2005 So cute. I'm gonna ignore the fact that they're both recovering from other long term relationships and this particular relationship propbably won't go anywhere. Nice writing. Update! |
| Tylorez chapter 3 . 4/26/2005 I love how you write. The narration is so cute, and funny! I really hope this story has a happy ending. I'd offer some constructive criticism, but I've just spent the aftenoon proofreading essays, so I'm out. Sorry. But this is coming along great and I can't wait to read more! |
| subtleline chapter 3 . 4/26/2005 U are damn right Oliver! It IS that nice! rawr! ...see what 2 days of no sleep does. And I must say the whole Oliver Twist perving just cracked me up. And yes I got the whole name corolation. I just ADORE him! Please don't let him be the threesome guy or something. Please for the love of all that is slash, don't! ...Yeah...definitely need the sleep. As for our dear sweet Andy, it's kinda scary how similar our thought patterns are. I mean the whole talk then off on a tangent and returning...not to meant the divulgence of too much info. So cute though. Well, that's it for this break. Back to work. Update soon. I need entertainment! PLEASE! |
| Niall chapter 2 . 4/24/2005 "It's hard" *snickers* Because I am, in fact, 5 years old. More. Now! |
| Amanda chapter 2 . 4/24/2005 Another fabulously written story. So have you previosly given Andrew a discription cuz I can't seem to remember what he is supposed to look like. Too bad Oliver is gay, he is so hot. Can't wait to read the next chapter. |
| ddz008 chapter 2 . 4/23/2005 Nice story!I liked this two first chapters...I must say that Oliver goes straight to the point, but he is cute XDPoor Andy, I don't like Collin...Hope to see the next chapter pretty soon!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D |