This story seriously kicks ass. funny thing is that it resembles a lot of people I know... (looks at herself in mirror)

is Oliver the guy that collin and him had there threesome wiht? i mean he says he recognizes him and all and that he's gorgouse as i think i remeber he was metioned in the first chapter as being very good looking. its been bothering me forever! the last few days anyway so thought i would at least ask. and oh god would that be awful. bleh, and i know you'r not going to tel me and i'm going to have to wait. i hate that. but, this is good. i wnat MORE! as soon as possile, of course. but i had to ask that. it has jsut been bugging me forever! (and if i guessed right DO NOT tell me. even though i dont' expect you to anyways, but i dont' want to know. it owuld jsut ruin things) of course i will be annoyed with wondering forever. *sigh* the price we pay to read stories not completely written &/Or posted. wonderful though! have more, NOW! please?

wOOt! This story kicks ARSE! UPDATE COZ OMG THIS IS SO FUNNY!

ah, update SOON, very soon. Or else I may explode from the anticipation XD hehe, in other words, I love this story

LOL

"Kisses are nice.

Oliver pretty.

Beer good.

More later."

Love that part.

I love the way tis is going. More now. Not more later.

one of these days I'm going to sign in...Awesome chapter. I loved the last bit- the short sentences. Very amusing. Aww. Cute! Loved it. feeling out of it at the moment. So going now! LOVED IT! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

'Kisses are nice.

Oliver pretty.

Beer good.'

Love that bit. Can't wait for more.

Please tell me Oliver isn't the 18 year old who "out hotted him by leaps and bounds" that Colin left him for (aka the Olie-the-threesome-kid). That would be... well, it would be interesting and I strongly get the feeling that's exactly where this is heading. But, hey, I've been wrong plenty a time before. Good stuff! Update soon please!

This is good, it makes me smile...I'm not exactly sure why, because it's kinda depresing, but it still makes me smile, I guess because Andrew's really awkward and cute. umm...nice job, keep writing...I never know how to end a review without looking like a moron, so uh..I'm done.

Aw man, that's adorable. Improbable as hell, but awesome to think of happening. Unless, you know, they live in a smaller town. Then it would be more probable. Er, yeah, I don't make much sense. :) Sweet!

~Sasa

Really good chapter! Lol, I like the Burger King job XD

Andrew is so cute. and oliver is way better than colin!

M! Aww, Andrew's adorable-and I love the name Oliver. I like how they met-that's cute and original. Continue

:-D Oh, this is good stuff. Highly amusing! Please update!

Okay the last 4 lines were amazing. That's me at least five times a day...I need help. And I do so love your stories. I like this one so far, though I'm trying to figure out where he knows him from. I kno it'll b revealed in time but half the fun is hypothesizing. Thanks so much for posting this. And I would like to state that my brain was born in the gutter and will forever reside there...I going 2 b one flithy grandma.