._. it's such a good start..i hope you continue this one and the other ones (slightly disappointed at the epilogue in Flowers..)

keep it up!

Wow, what a first chapter. All i have to say is next one please, i'm hooked. xx

Amazing introduction and idea for a story. I don't want to se this one go unfinished like some of your other works. Please please please keep going with this. I will be ever so happy if you do.

Don't keep your readers waiting for too long.

wow... GReaT first chapter i cant say any thing else really, that pretty much sums it up. i cant wait for the rest.

Hey, this is a great start! Poor Andrew. This is going to have a happy ending, right? Please? SorryI don't havenanything really construvtive to comment on, but update soon!

one word... AWESOME

I'm really enjoying the style and voice of this one. It isn't gorgeous, or flowing, or... whatever. But it's very real, and I adore it. *hugs the story*

Can't wait for the next chapter!

HiI really like this. This is a really good first chapter. my first chapters always seem to be lacking something... but i really really want to read more of this!~Kate

Whoa, cool! That was awesome! Omg, I can't wait for the next chapter! UPDATE QUICKLY! ...awesome...

Such an interesting start.. and format. I like how conversational this chapter seems. It really provides an opportunity for the protaganist, Andy, to orm his way into your heart. Mission accomplished! Heh. And the ending was done well.. it's not cliff hanger in the sense that he's at death's door or whatever, and it's actually kind of positive, but it very much leaves you wanting more. So more. Please.