| Reviews for The Fine Art of Falling Apart |
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   Stefen chapter 9 . 8/3/2005 That was truely great ending to an amazing story. You are very talented. I loved this story! Nice work |
| newtypeshadow chapter 8 . 8/1/2005 whether or not you continue, i want you to know i've enjoyed this story immensely! if you do continue, i'd love to know how dinner went and whether oliver's natural goodness will charm andrew's parents as much as colin's false sweetness. if you don't continue, i've loved this story all the same. cheers! |
| Becker chapter 8 . 7/20/2005 Good story yet... Somehow I hoped to _really_ see the people falling apart here... not a sappy-happy ending. |
| Liebe-Sasa is lazy chapter 8 . 7/15/2005 Not. Totally not. Stop this story and... and... Something bad will happen! Good job and all that jazz. I'm too lazy for constructive criticism or pointing out what I liked. ~Sasa |
| Nails For Your Crucifix chapter 8 . 7/14/2005 Have been having a busy summer. I haven't had time to read any of your stories, but I've decided not to write my essay for philosophy and read this instead. Wonderful job (as always). You can't let this story end here. |
| mitenarez chapter 8 . 7/10/2005 hey.. dont end this story.. its kinda wasted if u end it.. i mean write bout the dinner.. what oliver ate.. or how much oliver.. that will be kinda funny.. |
| LooseNativeMoose chapter 8 . 7/8/2005 hopefully not the end |
| City Lights Burn Like Stars chapter 8 . 6/30/2005 i like it i love it i want some more of it! update soon |
| Teddy Ricker chapter 8 . 6/28/2005 That was awesome! I don't know where else you could go with it, but please try to think of somewhere, because it is so good! If I think of anything I will let you know. Multi Bene!~P'Dale Buddy out |
| Coconutofdoom chapter 8 . 6/27/2005 NO YOU CANT END IT! Kill someone off, or...something! lol. I really like this story! you cant end it! |
| ddz008 chapter 8 . 6/27/2005 Great chapter!It was nice, they're really sweet!But I would really like to read about the dinner and even to see the next chapter pretty soon, please!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D |
| K. T. Wood chapter 8 . 6/27/2005 Hahaha. You're so funny. Last chapter. Yeah right. I will chase you with a stinky salmon if this is the last chapter...I swear I will...Loved it. You're such a funny writer. I loved that you could actually write how someone would say, 'very good' with their mouth full. AWESOME. Love it. Please don't make it the last chapter, I'll cry...then chase you!Love it. Update soon! Haha. I loved that his wallet is crying. So funny! |
| PlzNsertSN chapter 8 . 6/27/2005 I think this is kinda an ending, you should write the dinner chapter, but I think that should be an ending. I don't know, if you feel like continuing you should, I don't really want it to end because I love the characters, but this chapter seemed to be winding the story down. Great job, I hope you at least write the dinner chapter. |
| tangled-wires-of-doom chapter 8 . 6/27/2005 This was an awesome chapter! Please don't make this the last chapter TT_TTI'd really like to see how the dinner with his parents went lol. Bye! Update soon! |
| Silver Sparkz chapter 8 . 6/27/2005 ! This is so good! Heh, I especially love the last line. |