| Reviews for The Fine Art of Falling Apart |
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   Cookie Gestapo chapter 8 . 6/27/2005 Ho'migod I nearly died when I read 'last chapter' then I read the rest and let out a sigh. I'm glad you love wrighting this storie because I definetly love reading it. |
| StarDust Rocker chapter 8 . 6/27/2005 NU! You can't end it! I dunno maybe about 10 more chapters? Hmm? Whaddya say? Well, I say get to work on th next chapter! |
| k.arnet chapter 8 . 6/27/2005 NO DONT END IT YET!I LOVE THIS STORY! I WANT MORE! PLEASE! |
| Wolfwitch chapter 8 . 6/27/2005 I really enjoy this. I would like to see how the dinner with the parents goes, though, so please don't end it here! |
| Wolfwitch chapter 7 . 6/23/2005 Ollie is so sweet! I now want a pet Ollie to add to the menagerie of Yah. Or maybe he could join the harem? He could make out with other hot harem boys... |
| Cam chapter 1 . 6/22/2005 The first chapters are really and style of writing suits you. And Andrew's point of view is one thats funny, relatable and often sad. I realise Colin's what keeps it interesting but God I wanna smack him. I hate those kind of people. "I'm God's gift so I can justify treating you like shit". Gotta say I'm not feelin the love for Oliver right now. Just a bit of sympathy. This is really good. Well done so far. Now commence writing. |
| itgoesunsaid chapter 7 . 6/17/2005 love the story so far. |
| LooseNativeMoose chapter 7 . 6/16/2005 hehe, that was cute, I loved hearing it from his point of view with Andrew's little comments snuck in |
| Teddy Ricker chapter 7 . 6/16/2005 That was very cool. I liked how you did this chapter from Oliver's point of view, it gave more depth to his character. Plus it is nice to know what he was thinking and how he felt through the story so far. ~P'Dale Buddy out~ |
| tangled-wires-of-doom chapter 7 . 6/14/2005 Awesome chapter! It's cool to see Oliver's side of the story. Can't wait for the next chappie! |
| Yuvia chapter 7 . 6/14/2005 I just love this story. The feel. The hot gay guys having sex. The entire package. Good show B! |
| Stefen chapter 7 . 6/14/2005 :-) Yay for those two! :-) Hehehe |
| Ladako chapter 7 . 6/14/2005 Oh, a chap in Oliver's POV. I liked it. He's nice and I'm not mad at him. I feel bad for him, Colin is such an asshole! Lying like shit to both of them about changing! . I thought the ending of this chap was hilarious though! Lol! Great chap, update soon though kay? C ya! |
| rainbowskye chapter 7 . 6/14/2005 It was great to see another POV.. always the lightness at the very end was a nice addition to a serious/angsty orientated chapter |
| Annonymous Writer chapter 7 . 6/14/2005 AWesome, loved it. Can't stop laughing |