|Reviews for Sleepover|
| Random And Not Needed chapter 2 . 11/8/2011
MY MAN UR MY FRIEND
TOGETHER TILL THE END
ACROSS THE MEADOW WE GO
AND GLIDING OVER A RAINBOW
I DONT MIND IF YOUR MINE
I DONT CARE WHAT THEY SAY
I LIKE BEING GAY!
SO LETS DO IT TODAY.
A gay poem. I didn't paste it on the site cause im to young .
Plz r and r for it.(SORRY SANDSO...)
| showcreator chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Sorry, I really am unable to enjoy this. No offense.
| Tomiyo Hikura chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
Good. I love to read a good yaoi story. I give you an A. (-)
| Morbid Maxwell chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
Please don't think I'm being a bitch...this isn't a flame so.
There were a few spelling errors, but thats not what bothered me. It was how you had it in script style when they were talking, maybe if you have them talk like you did for the details and stuff...it may improve it, thats all.
The story was good, but, thats kind of...neh. I liked it, but that sort of nagged at me. Again, not a flame, just advice.
Morbid Maxwell-It's a Beyblade orgy!