Reviews for Unspoken Desire
Baddy Abby chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Love it
BrkLynzum chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
Awsome Story, I'll be Happy to Read More Of Them!

I'm Getting Hard Already!:) LOL
Richard Lafayette Cox V chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Not bad, but I felt like the middle was a bit awkward, the part before they begin to mess around.

Other than that, good writing :)
Estelin chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait to read more.
LeFoxy chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Awesome angst! Good story!

Le-chan
oksana chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
wow!

that was so hot. i want more!
Glacier Pheonix chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
Damn now I'm horny thanks to you!
Vanessa chapter 1 . 1/10/2007
Please continue!Great job on the story so far1Continue soon please!
Niwatori chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
Nothing quite like a girl about to "organism". I wonder if it was a micro-organism. Hee hee hee!

AHAHA! Two people yelling each other's names and climaxing at the same time? That's hilarious!Hee hee hee... Just like in the movies! AHAHAHA!

Funny funny Very funny piece.