|Reviews for tomorrow|
| battered and bruised chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
very good! the last line awsome. :):)
| kit feral chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
This is so one of my favorites. So beautiful. The abrupt ending to the lines really fit. I can’t pick a favorite line, though I really liked the last two. But the whole thing was just awesome. Great work, keep it up!
| my failure chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
this is soo have a great talent!
| Prevaricate chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
Interesting idea. I've never seen a poem written in this style, with such a cynical end. I like.
| BlueRose218 chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
Cool format, I like how my eyes had to dart off to the side to read "If tomorrow existed"
| lostcoastlines chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
oh, i loved this.
[if tomorrow existed
i'm sure it would save me]
| Infection chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
l0ved your last lfew lines, they were great, i also went on your homepage, which was ok. :D
| Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
whoa, really catching to me. It captured me so well that it felt like the words gripped my heart tightly. The rhythm and the emotions are purely strong. great work! and thank you for the review
| Written chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
reminds me suddenly of the song from "annie". though much darker and beautiful. nicely done! it haunts.
| LauraKM chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
Wow, that i love, really love, i'm adding it to my favorites, brilliant. I really like the idea, great.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
wow, such deep meaning behind those seemingly simple words.
| youzi chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
Funny how we think things will be solved if we leave them till tomorrow..not sure if that's healthy, but we're all guilty of this.. Great piece...loved your voice. Keep writing D
| Simply Stupid chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
Oh! I love this! I love the tone of it! It seems almost light hearted and ideallic at first, the phrases such as "silly tears" and "cry baby" make you sort of think of parents or old ladies picking you up when you've fallen over or something (well, that's the image i get), as if they are both trying to look after you but slightly repremanding you, which is what you are doing to youself here. then it gets a little more serious in the last section, i like "knock down all the silence that keeps us apart" very good. And the last two lines just really finish it off brilliantly! Well done, great poem! This is a favourite!
| arcane devices chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
nice, I enjoyed this one alot. The only thing I didn't like was the form you putted it in but nevertheless I still enjoyed it. -ADD
| kayttea chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
wow. that really good. keep writing!