Reviews for they said they found a body
swtdreamz101 chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
interesting, can be interpreted in so many ways, nice poem
silkydaydreams chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
the rhymes off and its "immature" : P

I dont know what you're trying to say with this peice. But i thought it creepy and erotic so I think you did a good job on it. Just emphasize the main idea of the poem, what it represents.