|Reviews for graffiti|
| xhaiiro chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
This amuses me so much. I especially like the ending.
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
Interesting look at graffiti. Some say it's a way to relieve stress, others, just a way to prove to yourself that you're no sissy. But they really should clean it up. Good job.
| ygg chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
I like it! Great way to convey this clear message.
| wantedINheaven chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
Gr... people and graffiti! It angers me so much. _
Nice and short. Good read.
| Moonjava chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
Intersting, can't say that I've ever read a poem about graffitti. Creative.
| kayttea chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
heehee cute poem. graffiti is interesting...o.0
ps.- i despise hillary duff as well dont worry. *shudder* curse her name.
| obsidian katana chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
they never clean it up. i feel that way about most graffiti as well, but some graffiti is truly art. i love that kind. like there's this wall inside a parking lot that is covered with awesome graffiti. anyway this is well written.
| Anna178 chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
i find this ironic, it put a smirk on my face. No one cleans up they're own messes. This has so much unspoken meaning. Brilliant.
| Ephemeral Seraphim chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
Oh, now this was really clever. The ending was cute, and you manage to depict snippets of truth into your lovely poems. It's true what KonekOniko said, graffiti writing does look neat, but only if it's on paper, not on walls. I like how you take something seemingly simple and fashion it into your own style, which is a talent that poets have. Very very very nice, and if you stop writing then...I promise I'll track you down! _
| life like whoa chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
Beautiful! I love how the last line you say
"Aren't you going to clean it up?"
That was the perfect ending for yet another perfectly written poem by you!
And don't worry, I won't stop writing! lol, but it's good to know you like my work. Makes me overly happy! And now I continue writting with a smile on my face! Thanx to you! *tear of joy*
| Kusje chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
Hm. Interesting Kuroi-chan..interesting.. xD hehe! Graffiti!..like Porno Graffiti (Jrock!) xD hehe! ja ne!~
| KonekOniko chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
lol, great job. personally, i hate graffiti, but i love the style it's written in (my friends and i once did an art project [poster] with nothing but graffiti writing. so0o much fun, looked so0o cool, i would never do it to a wall. besides, markers wouldn't show as nicely XD)
very good job, really shows your voice in this one! *claps*
~Sumi-chan; What you call love, I call pain.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
again, wow. nice!
| SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
Another great one, so simple yet so deep. And I hate graffiti, it just looks so...meh... Anyhoo it rocked. Well done. QueenVixta
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/8/2005