Reviews for in the shower
smile persephone chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
Damn this is hot. You're full of this kind of thing lately, aren't you? (I'm reading them from the top to the bottom-newest to oldest.) I see this as sex or masturbation. Either way, its hot. Nicely done!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
damn. wow... *stares*
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
Whoa...dark...I'm too creeped to have a shower now...lol. Great piece, really strong and powerful wording. QueenVixta
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
(muffeling the dire scream)... muffling

very powerful & beautifully written
katmonkey chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
Powerful imagery there. I like.

Lime
having reached closure chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
I hadn't read the title when I started reading this and at first I imagined you in a downpour of acid rain O.O But then I saw the title and it made perfect sense. This poem is so beautiful and just plain wow.

...But a downpour of acid rain would be purty nifty...yet quite painful...

Teehee

Naomi

(infinate hearts plus one)
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