|Reviews for in the shower|
| smile persephone chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
Damn this is hot. You're full of this kind of thing lately, aren't you? (I'm reading them from the top to the bottom-newest to oldest.) I see this as sex or masturbation. Either way, its hot. Nicely done!
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
damn. wow... *stares*
| SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
Whoa...dark...I'm too creeped to have a shower now...lol. Great piece, really strong and powerful wording. QueenVixta
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
(muffeling the dire scream)... muffling
very powerful & beautifully written
| katmonkey chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
Powerful imagery there. I like.
| having reached closure chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
I hadn't read the title when I started reading this and at first I imagined you in a downpour of acid rain O.O But then I saw the title and it made perfect sense. This poem is so beautiful and just plain wow.
...But a downpour of acid rain would be purty nifty...yet quite painful...
(infinate hearts plus one)