Reviews for Hidden Fantasy
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
I like how you turned an everyday event into a poem. That's very cool. I don't know what Mallabar's is, but if I did, I'm sure the poem would be even better. Nice work, though.
WannaBWriter chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
hey i don't know you but i really liked your poem. keep it up!
SKATENaked-BlindReaper chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
god, i love this.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
O, I like, nice rhythm that carries it right along.