Reviews for New Kid |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Okay um wow. A bit-o-boy-fluff, standing up to A* 'friends' and trying to make things right. Now that's a rollercoaster ride of what's gonna happen next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm, very very interesting. Now I've gotta read on to see how it plays out between Adam and Gavin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good, good. Lots of lemons. :P |
![]() ![]() please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol omigosh.. I had no idea that you had the same name for your characters. :) Just know that I got the name, "Gavin" from my nephew, I like that name so I chose it lol.. And how weird, Adam is Elliot's middle name. XDD I got that from my cousin, I get most of the names for my characters from family members. "Ethan" is my half-brother. Whelp! Thanks for reading my story, I really like this one! I like how you write, I need to slow down a bit on my storys things change so fast XD I just can't wait to get all the mysteries solved. Thanks anyway! -Kathy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story so far, and was wondering if you ever plan on finishing it. Please? lol Update soon! ~Mia |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say, I find it...difficult to do my work when my inspiration is lacking. And now that I'm on my last week before finals, I could really use some reassuring...but my favorite story hasn't been updated in so long...gah! |
![]() ![]() Hey goofball... They copywrited it to YOU. Not to their site. They're doing you a favor, no one can steal and reproduce your work without getting in trouble since fictionpress is protecting you w/ the copywrite. Pleas update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was wondering when you're going to update. |
![]() ![]() Copyright 2005 Esquirella (FictionPress ID:241472). All rights reserved. Distribution of any kind is prohibited without the written consent of Esquirella. Isn't that what you meant? I see it, does it not appear on your comp? |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is that it? Please say no! You have got to update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you're so human... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Every once in a while, i scroll up just to see if it's /really/ rated M. And then I squeal in joy when i discover that it is! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You just stop posting chapts on this one then? Huh well ok it would be nice to know the rest but you more things I suppose. |