Reviews for New Kid
distortedreflection chapter 9 . 9/13/2006
OH OH OH i like Gavin though he does kind sound of pathetic at the begining. it was still good though
ArchAngelic the Reborn chapter 9 . 7/15/2006
I'm curious to see how Adam's parents will react, so please update soon.

FIND THAT MUSE
ArchAngelic the Reborn chapter 8 . 7/15/2006
So that's why Adam hangs out with Dumb and Dumber...

Anyway, I really like this story so far.
ArchAngelic the Reborn chapter 7 . 7/15/2006
Like I said, Gavin isn't as innocent as he seems...

Great chapter
ArchAngelic the Reborn chapter 6 . 7/15/2006
Dumb and Dumber can talk? Dumb and Dumber actually have brains? I sure hope they use them, even though I'm not quite sure what brought this change in attitude
ArchAngelic the Reborn chapter 5 . 7/15/2006
Oh my, Adam the great wit, strikes again! Tell Chris to make sure I take my gym clothes with me once a week? Haha!

Although it's probably good for the plot, I think Adam pretty much overreacted. He shouldn't have lost his temper with Dumb and Dumber...
ArchAngelic the Reborn chapter 4 . 7/15/2006
Yeah, NOW he wants to stop Dumb and Dumber from teasing Gavin. Now that he's getting something out of it...BTW, I LOVE Adam's parents!
ArchAngelic the Reborn chapter 3 . 7/15/2006
So, the twosided chase continues... Also, I hope I don't get the urge to kill Gavin's father later on. So, in case you haven't written that yet, please don't let me go homicidal...
ArchAngelic the Reborn chapter 2 . 7/15/2006
I sort of feel ike asking: who's chasing who? Although Adam did make the first move here, I have a feeling Gavin isn't as innocent as he seems...
ArchAngelic the Reborn chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
Dumb and Dumber go cute? And Adam is such an asshole: peer-pressure and small-group-dynamics aside, he could've stopped his friends from picking on Gavin (offhanded and seemingly meaningless remarks can get you pretty far)
kimper chapter 9 . 6/15/2006
This is just an excellent story. You've done a wonderful job with the characters. Your writing always draws me in, the characters always seems to alive. It's great.
Black Suns' Zenith chapter 9 . 5/17/2006
I really like this story. I also like a couple of your stries and I like your writing style. I had two upper teeth pulled a few hours ago, so I read your stories and it made me feel better. I'm getting oral surgery, for a lower tooth, that is attach to the bone. It's the only baby tooth I have left. Anyway, I can't wait till your next installment, Bye for now!
noname52 chapter 9 . 4/6/2006
I love your writing style. This is a really good story! Keep up the good writing.
glittering-dew chapter 9 . 1/19/2006
positively adorable. You have a wonderful way with words, and Adam and Gavin felt very real to me. Their feelings were captured so well. m, and very lemony.
ComaWhite799 chapter 9 . 12/11/2005
I love the story, it's getting better and better. I hope you come out with the next chapter soon.
255 | « Prev Page 1 2 3 4 5 12 .. Last Next »