Reviews for Advocate
ModernScribe chapter 37 . 7/14/2010
Wow. I can't believe it's over. This has to be one of the best fantasy novels I've read since Harry Potter, and I read a lot of fantasy. Can't write it, but love it anyway. You, on the other hand, can definitely write it! I was so into this that I spent an entire day and half a night reading. And even then it took me another whole afternoon to finish! It took you what, a little over eight months (not including revisions) to write this? Gee, I can barely stay focused on a story for a few weeks let alone months! I really admire your dedication. Not to mention your skill. Whew, if your writing was this wonderful five years ago, I can only imagine what it is now. I'm off to find out. Yippee! A sequel!
estrela jem chapter 38 . 7/6/2010
Wow! This has been the best story I've read in a very long time! I almost didn't want to finish it because I didn't want it to end! I love Matt! So cute! Great job with the whole story! You had a very good balence between plot and description which I can never seem to get! If you do write a sequal I'd definately love to read it!
InspiredVisionary chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
hheyy its me again! if you dont recognize me-i reviewed on your story- demon awakening- just a few minutes ago. while i was reviewing that i realized that i forgot to review this story. its my favorite one right now and i can definetly say that i LOVED it. it was pretty long- whhich i liked a lot- and had an interesting plot with original writing! ill be reading all your stories, as im sure many other people are too. byee- it really late riight now- or i could say early...
Layla the fiend chapter 2 . 1/26/2010
“Well, if you weren’t such an antisocial curmudgeon, maybe light wouldn’t hurt your eyes.”

lolwut. I think I'm going to start calling people curmudgeon now.
THeUNNamED chapter 37 . 1/25/2010
wow...just wow...seriously this story was absolutely amazing to read. You know those kinds of stories that you get so caught up in that when it end it feels as if something's missing? Your story was one of those types.

AMAZING job!
jellybeancurd chapter 38 . 11/13/2009
that was, to say the least, AWESOME.
pandorka42 chapter 32 . 11/6/2009
I just realized Mr. Nivier is Reivin backwards. Sneaky sneaky.

-Mags
pandorka42 chapter 31 . 11/4/2009
Cliffhangers Evil.

-Mags
pandorka42 chapter 25 . 11/4/2009
The ending was confusing, but confusing is okay because it leads to questions, and questions lead to the want for answers. Always a good tactic. ;)

-Mags
getoutoftheblue chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
I've actually read this story twice before, and now I've come back to read it just because i miss you characters.

Awesome story
hybrid-cookie chapter 37 . 2/4/2009
I really liked this. It was very epic! Loved Matt and Ravin, you even got my liking Sarah towards the end :)
Kani Dectsani chapter 37 . 9/6/2008
Okay, I did stay up after curfew, JUST to finish reading your story.

You should post Xiphias' and Sepfeer's story. I would LOVE to read it.

And you said it yourself that you'd like to fill the story out with more details. I've been saying that you should put more details. DO IT! It doesn't matter if it gets a little long. Heck, Harry Potter can get a 10 page book, why can't you?

I'm onto the sequel! Not tonight, but starting tomorrow, it's The Last Judgement TIME! *cheers* Find me there, okay?
Kani Dectsani chapter 36 . 9/6/2008
Ooh. An Awakening... *laughs*

Sad chappy... *cries*

Well Written chapter. *cheers*

Sad Chapter... *morns*

Anyway... It was wonderful! So many details. I was seriously crying at the end. There is NO way that I'm leaving just yet. With only ONE chapter left to go, I might just have to push curfew a little bit.

NEXT! And Final!
Kani Dectsani chapter 35 . 9/6/2008
Again. I HATE REIVIN!

It was a good chapter! I'm a little confused, though. Did Arli go with them, or not?

Davin... I miss him...

Next?
Kani Dectsani chapter 34 . 9/6/2008
o.o *wimper*

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Those are my feelings about this chapter. Now for the technicalities. Well written. Enough to bring tears to my eyes. Uhg... I HATE REIVIN!

Anway, well written chapter. I didn't like it, because I loved Davin.

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