I would so love a sequel. I'm not that good of an author, I'm horrible at plot twists and all that jazzy stuff, and I can never keep a story going. Perhaps if I had enough details I could be as good as you, but I rather doubt it.

I think Davin was my favourite character, next to Matt that is. It's nice to see an author create so many likeable characters. I loved the fact that he didn't even know about the devil and I love all those secrets which are revealed so casually.

Like when he tells her who he really is, I love it! I love how you surprise me so often.

On another note, I also love A Light in the Dark. You should publish something, you could become famous!

oh yeah, forgot to tell i'll definatly read if a sequal comes... once i notice it's there

wow... that was a damn good story! i think your story is the first where first main carracter (Sarah) didn't help much other than as an emotional anchor and suport when Matt was exausted... just brilliant!

just one thing... how was Davin able to, despite beeing able to cast fire magic, borrow Sarahs kirosu and use it without him getting "burned"?

ok well first off i'm gunna get this out of the, i loved the story! (why else would i have read the whole thing lol) so now that the wonderful epic is over i have deem it worthy of a critique! ok well as far as the story line goes it was good. so things were a little cliched but over all you did a wonderful job presenting it, and aslo you didnt have any major grammar problems that so many others have. . . you actually had hardly any! great job an that too! one thing thought that i noticed was that sometimes in 'sarah-monologue' she would say that she never had expreienced anything like something else, for example, if there was a life and death situation going on she would think about how she had never felt 'fear such as that' but the problem with that is that a few chapters back she was thinking the same thing, then inevitably she did it again a few chapters later. its not really as bad as i'm making it out to be but its something i noticed. other then some slight redundancy you did great though! i'm definately gunna read the sequel! ! !

fantastic start up i got pulled into it, well played out, i only started reading it so im looking forward to reading the rest of it, im chuffed i caught it when it was finished.

Oh, boo hoo! It's all over! My favorite story on Fiction is over!...Oh well, guess I'll wait for your next blockbuster!

*ahem*...You did it! You finished it! I can't believe I didn't see this as soon as it was up...I feel so STUPID! But I was right about Sarah's sword, that makes me feel better, or at least a bit. I love the ending, it's completely and utterly perfect. I'm sorry Davin had to die, but then, much of the point would have been lost if he hadn't...So, Sarah and Matt tied the knot, eh? Good for them. Can't wait to read what's next! Hm, I should go check out A Light In The Dark...

I loved it! You should try to get it published. I loved how it ended it with Sarah writing a letter, though I think that it might need some more with Sarah's parents and their town. Sarah Celentis, has a nice ring. Loved it!

WOW. 0_0 That was GOOD! Yay-ness! :D

An excellent ending, proves that even the devil himself has a heart. I like the little touch at the end of Sarah's letter. Makes me wonder if there will be stories about the next generation of Celentis.

i swear to u that I will read the sequal cause i am in love with Advocate! It was wonderful!

Just finished the story, its so awesome. Keep writing. :)

bah... what happened to our corney YOUR ALIVE *kiss* ending? thats what we all really wanted lol _

Lol I loved this chapter, I agree things in the begining did sound really really rushed to me, I'd think that since Davin does die he deserves more limelight. Maybe you could make a min-story of Sepfee and Xiphias later, that is if your not working yourself too hard trying to revise "A Light in the Dark." Maybe you could add instead of on your bio page, you could make a list of it and post it at the end of this. That would be really really convieniant. (sp?) OH WELL! Keep up the excellent work!

Great conclusion. I never would've thought to put a letter in, and it summed everything up really well. Although I AM sorry that the story has to end...oh well. There's always the next one. Great job!