|Reviews for Addicted to You|
| deets1 chapter 32 . 1/13/2013
Oh yeah. Just wanted to say: this story is worth my coming night (morning) with only 1-2 hours of sleep. Yep.
| deets1 chapter 33 . 1/13/2013
You. You are unfair. Look at you: having your cake and eating it too. Gah. Thank you.
But still. You stink. XD
I swear I was 300% done by the last chapter. Honestly, by the time sen left for the airport I was just like: just leave. Make up your mind. God. What melodrama. XD
And then Leif said his fucking screamed four words and I was just like: okay. You can stay. Please?
I swear and the first time they had sex? I saw the result coming from a mile away. I begged her to tell him fist begged her. Like what.
And MAN both of them are just stupid.
But sen, it did start with you.
Ryder notwithstanding, ehem... MARK? Heck, LEE? Or I'm sorry, 'brown haired mark'.
I swear your story.
There were highs, and lows...
And then by the end I went from sad to cynical to sad to... Oh god when Leif kissed her to show her how it feels to be 'used'?
I honestly did not know what I was feeling then.
I swear the feels.
I was just dumbstruck in the hysterical kind of way... Just disbelief and a whole lotta other emotions.
God you're mean.
And I was ready to brainwash myself after that 'ending'.
Thank god you're... Whatever you are.
Suffice to say it may be a while-a LONG while before I read the rewrite. I just... this needs to ruminate. For weeks. It was good. Really good. Too good. Wow. May never read the rewrite.
But really it will be forever.
Thank you for writing this,
| Kirihime chapter 33 . 1/7/2013
This was awesome! Hope the rewritten version is just as crazy!
| RandomKid95 chapter 33 . 1/4/2013
Awww man this is friggin awesome! Like the full thing! I actually admire your genius :)
| jojo91 chapter 33 . 12/28/2012
This is a great story. Please write more..
| Ann1423 chapter 33 . 12/28/2012
OH MY GOD! BEST STORY EVER! I LOVE THIS! you're amazing :-) i literally read this in like 2 days. *obsessed* lol !
| Lapin chapter 33 . 12/28/2012
Man, all I can think is how awful it would be if she wanted to reject him! :P
| Lapin chapter 20 . 12/27/2012
GAH! I could just slap Leif silly! Or Sienna for that matter. Well... I guess mostly Sienna. SHE WAS SUPPOSED TO CONFESS HER UNDYING LOVE FOR HIM! But then again, that would be WAY too abrupt. And besides, a romance story is never complete without a lot of confused characters! (I'll just keep telling myself that...)
| twiinklex chapter 29 . 8/28/2012
Ah okay, I get the sex part now. Still wish it hadn't happened though :( and ouch, you're an evil writer! But I'm sure we all love that :P
| twiinklex chapter 27 . 8/28/2012
Kinda disappointed for now. Your story is practically flawless other than a few significant points.
Firstly, the transition earlier on and the other one afterwards, which I didn't think weren't smooth enough. It was really abrupt especially with how much Toby and the jocks hated the goths but suddenly it was all peace. Granted they didn't like each other still, but there were no fights and drama at all. As her brother, I thought he would react more with his sieter's growing friendship with the goths. He seemed to almost disappear from the story for a few chapters. Sen simply got kicked out of the group by Isabella without any claws, fights or questions. Though you said it's because of her brothers' influence so well, that I can try to believe. But everyone in the story just seemed to accept this situation too easily (whatever happened to Sen's inner struggles as well?) if you compare it to your start.
Next, Scott also disappeared despite being such an ass. I expected Sen to at least come clean to someone about the kind of person he actually is to her brother, if not to her friends (though I guess they had a rough idea). Then you seemed to remember about him suddenly and mentioned a sentence about him in a later chapter about him groping Sen. He needs better closure and I thought Toby would care more.
Because you always have the earlier chapters in great detail, it's really weird to suddenly skip months and just briefly describe the current situtation. I think you could have done the transitions less slowly (at a smaller frequency, maybe 2 weeks later or so then increasing to month, add more drama etc).
Then 2 chapters ago, I got the idea that Sen and Ryder almost had sex. But now every character acts like they had sex for real and you just confirmed it. I didn't like that her first time went this way (regardless of with who) because it's so careless and reckless but nevermind that. Ok, they had sex. But I thought since it's her first time, Sen should make a bigger deal out of it or at least let us gain some insight into her thoughts and POV.
Just some positive criticism. It's a wonderful story and one of the better ones on Fictionpress so keep it up. It's just that sometimes your story is so good that whenever there is something even slightly disappointing, the contrast is great.
| Hemtec chapter 33 . 8/15/2012
that was absolutelyyy AMAAAAAAAAAZINNNNNNNNNNNGGGG GGGGGGGGGGGG! haven't read a single story that had me so wrapped up like this one before.. it got me absolutely angry, frustrated, and curious that I coulnd't sotp reading!...this was an AMAZING story!
| Guest chapter 32 . 8/15/2012
Really? WHAT THE FUCK?! DID I JUST WAISTED AN ENTIRE DAY WITH THIS STUPID STORY FOR THAT STUPID FUCKED UP ENDING?
| Guest chapter 30 . 8/15/2012
I never hated a chapter so much in my life... Love you're story by the way, but you are absolutely evil
| Guest chapter 25 . 8/15/2012
I absolutely really hate Sienna!
| Guest chapter 20 . 8/15/2012
FINALLY! You had me waiting for it for 20 damm chapters! lol