Reviews for Seven Boats
Luma chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
Another lovely poem. I especially liked "Day has come and left with grace/Measured with each rising crest" It's really very, very good. I could almost smell the sea, hear the waves lapping against the pier and see the golden rays of the sun glittering on the surface.

-Lisa
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
Soft and relaxing.
Simon James chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
i like. nice concept. nice
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
Hmm, this makes me think about Lord of the Rings and the elves sailing away into the west. I see by your penname that I might not be too far off the mark.

My only suggestion for this is changing "left" in the third line to "gone," just because I think it would sound prettier. But that's just my opinion. Keep up the good work!