Reviews for The Wrong Way
hanakimi chapter 18 . 8/4/2010

I start work in the fall. This story has spanned my high school, college, and now the start of my career!


Hope all is well SB.
Hanakimi chapter 18 . 5/21/2010
I had another surgery. Update for me please?
PreviouslyDead chapter 14 . 5/8/2010
Right, the good thing? i like the way you write, your characters and there IS a story line, not just constant smut or whatever. The thing i'd sqay gets to me the most if the switching of POV without saying who is who at the top of the chapter on in the chapter name or whatever, its confusing. Just thought id let you know.
Hanakimi chapter 18 . 5/7/2010
Alright it's been two years since your last chapter. Update time!
Hanakimi chapter 18 . 4/25/2010
Young lady, I demand an update.
Nameless Shana chapter 12 . 3/31/2010
Nameless Shana chapter 9 . 3/31/2010
there's more to the story O.O
Nameless Shana chapter 8 . 3/31/2010
that's a nice way to get caught XD.

that was a nice save jonah. but how does he have money?

his mother beats him...and he likes the guilt should tell someone about it.

I really want to know about how josh lost his memories
Nameless Shana chapter 7 . 3/31/2010
I was confused on who's . till the end. now i understand that's in kelly's p.o.v. I think the confession was kind of rushed though
Nameless Shana chapter 6 . 3/31/2010
well you could say he jacked you off and almost got there all the way

Josh seems like a type of person who wants someone's attention most of the time.
Nameless Shana chapter 5 . 3/31/2010
how can he have sex with someone if you're tired? I feel that Jonah sends mix signals sometimes. Maybe Josh as well o.o...

Josh can be so cute sometimes. He still learning about everything
Nameless Shana chapter 4 . 3/31/2010
aw..I do wonder what happen in the past that made him land in the hospital. O.o...Junior High can cover some bases of high school...You just have to take extra classes.
Nameless Shana chapter 2 . 3/31/2010
wow. Four years in coma and you can't remember a thing. That's gotta suck. I would be confused and be all quiet like him. ,
Duuude chapter 17 . 2/20/2010

This is so sad.

I didn't realize it when it was all jokes and laughs.

But it sucks.


You're very good at portraying emotions because I can just see it all playing out in my head- that sad scene between Josh and Jonah.
DFG chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
Update! Update! Update! Pleeasee
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