Reviews for The Wrong Way |
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![]() ![]() UPDATE I start work in the fall. This story has spanned my high school, college, and now the start of my career! I DESERVE AN UPDATE! XD Hope all is well SB. |
![]() ![]() I had another surgery. Update for me please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Right, the good thing? i like the way you write, your characters and there IS a story line, not just constant smut or whatever. The thing i'd sqay gets to me the most if the switching of POV without saying who is who at the top of the chapter on in the chapter name or whatever, its confusing. Just thought id let you know. |
![]() ![]() Alright it's been two years since your last chapter. Update time! |
![]() ![]() Young lady, I demand an update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw..., |
![]() ![]() ![]() there's more to the story O.O |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's a nice way to get caught XD. that was a nice save jonah. but how does he have money? his mother beats him...and he likes the guilt part..you should tell someone about it. I really want to know about how josh lost his memories |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was confused on who's . till the end. now i understand that's in kelly's p.o.v. I think the confession was kind of rushed though |
![]() ![]() ![]() well you could say he jacked you off and almost got there all the way Josh seems like a type of person who wants someone's attention most of the time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() how can he have sex with someone if you're tired? I feel that Jonah sends mix signals sometimes. Maybe Josh as well o.o... Josh can be so cute sometimes. He still learning about everything |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw..I do wonder what happen in the past that made him land in the hospital. O.o...Junior High can cover some bases of high school...You just have to take extra classes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. Four years in coma and you can't remember a thing. That's gotta suck. I would be confused and be all quiet like him. , |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This is so sad. I didn't realize it when it was all jokes and laughs. But it sucks. :( You're very good at portraying emotions because I can just see it all playing out in my head- that sad scene between Josh and Jonah. |
![]() ![]() Update! Update! Update! Pleeasee |